The ripples in silent pond still carries the magic
The old tree stands alone, bows down
No one there…
A Stranger passes by
O what a lovely night, he says
The blue sky so high
O i so... i so miss her face.
It's hard to stop and glare
without her the moon looks a scar
the empty wine bottle trashed
vacant fag box and vacant his soul
The night stands alone
precious so much for someone else
to him its the loser’s wait
reason for more wine and heart break
P.S. At times its so difficult to move on with time. Every thing seems so stuck up. We have every thing we desire for but just one that thing which is missing makes our life miserable. life doesn’t seem to come in term. The long lectures from parents and long heart to heart conversation with friends too doesn’t work as healer.
36 comments:
1st.. yo!!!!!
very interesting read.. I must say... Seriously, You are more capable than what I thought of u till date.. :P
Very nicely written.. Cheer up..! Parents are frnds always help.. if not now.. then later but they do!
2nd ...YO YO !!!!
William Wordsworth huh ?
mast poem hai re ..ultimate ek dum ...boley toh jhakas...pun can't be better than this :D
@ abhinav
LOL
there was one more poem of her's which changed my idea about her like this poem did for u :D
(Continued from P.S.)
.....and thats a clear indication that u need time for urself..
P.S.: second comment of the evening but was just going thru some of ur earlier posts n found ur poems filled with deep hidden mystery..
thats when we need solitude.
thats when we need to confront to our inner self.
wish its a fiction or a small phase. take care.
Awesome !!!
very true..! nicely done nidhi..luved it :))
AAH nice, nidhi :)
the whole scene was right inside the mind being cinematographed..
good way of triggering the imagination
i've alrdy told u i love this...
d flow of imagination is brilliant...*claps*
great work. one of ur best ones ever i think \:D/
u need some time out to understand urself. parents and friends wont help u as much u will help urself
\:d/ but i still wont stop lecturing u :D :D :D :D :D :D
good work n new template :)
how z post bday hangover :)
So very true and i loved it.
U R Quite A Poetess !!
U R a genius...
and it shows.. :)
Nikhil
WE are the healer and we are the pain.
WE are the winner and we are the loser.
WE have to decide what we want from ourselves. Rest god decide.
hidden talent u see ABHINAV
PETER THE SINGER -- ek poet se apreciation se aur badi baat kya hosakti hai??
ASHUTOSH
i need time for myself??? wht do u mean??
SAWAN
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not a phase .. its just fiction. m having fun with out actually dealing with it :)
SNEHA
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Thanks
TRINAA
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thanks trinaa. :)
CHITWAN
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heheh i triggered ur brain?? hw can i blast it?? hahaha
i didntr knw u r mads college fren bfore her blogger fren :\
she said u participated in dance!!
@Mays
bows back
MADS
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acha?? u always tell this "best ones everr i think" to all my fiction post
:P
@Sid-
ek din ka hangover.. its over its over!@!! screams.. lol
thanks fr teh template.
poem k liye kuch nahi bola tune :(
@Ria
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i loved it too \:D/
@M.J
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m impressed!!
@Menon
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:)
@Hobo
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i like wht u wrote
U have been awarded...pls visit my blog ! :)
@Born vegabond
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hey i checked the award. thanks for appreciating my blog n me ;)
i will soon update my blog with ur award \:D/
beautifully written!!
true..some things dont heal with time...moving on is not easy but we surely can try moving beyond it...
and then again, when the time is right, u automatically get over it and thats when u dont even realise u have...it just happens!! :)
keep writing!
good one nidhi....
hats off. very well spoken Pri.
TRy karne main koi harz nahi. N if we try we might not fail. Be should stay postivie.
@Mia-
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thanks n thanks for wishes too though belated. I knw ur life is little messed up. I hope all gets fine soon
What the hell are you trying to say? do you even have a point?
Kya baat hain Niddzzi... tu toh shaayraa ho gayi...
Mast poem likh daali... bilkul Dhinchak hain...oye!
hey babe.....i am in love with your poems because they talk my mind out with yours....so true it is......keep writing....someday .....someday...they mit just understand the silence!
hey babe.....i am in love with your poems because they talk my mind out with yours....so true it is......keep writing....someday .....someday...they mit just understand the silence!
@harshita
I wish i was a director of movie oye Harshi oye :P
@Aditi-
u got so glued to my blog that u commented twice??? hehe
thanks yes i hope someday they understand the silence n express to their loved ones
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