At times we don’t know what’s happening and we can’t change it. At times thing happens and we don’t know when it occurred. At times everything is so misty, so unclear. And at times things goes so wrong and we don’t know how to fix it. In want of something more we lose what we have. The thin line between friendship and love is lost. Why do you think there is no name for relation which is more than friendship and less than love? we call them special friends but still the word friend exist. We call it soft corner but we don’t have any specific meaning for soft corners. May be this relation is abstract that’s why we don’t have any name to it or may be this relation is not suppose to exist.
Dust and then clear 
dark and then light
help me see with these blurry eyes
make me understand what’s right
thin line to cross friendship
and then it tickles
for I see my love, his seeking eyes, his questioning lip
I cross question myself and I flicker
take away all these feelings
I know it’s not right
can't live with all these dealing
these are not mine
42 comments:
Woah!
Frankly I don't believe that Nidhi it's u who has written this!
}:-)
lovely!
~Y2A~
@Abhinav- i seriously wanna know what u think i m .. i mean u always say i never seen this side of u . or never knew u can write such stuff. :P
every post from is a surprise. :)
2nd to comment 2nd to comment \:D/
this is the 1st poem of urs which i read 3 times again and again and to interpret what ur trying to say...!!!
i loved it.
u hv this thing in ur poems to keep the reader always guessing what ur feeling, which is a great compliment ...
nidhi to nidzzi? :O :O cool che \:d/
mast poem. really...Why do you think there is no name for relation which is more than friendship and less than love??---> so true che... !!!
and no answers che \:D/ :"> :D
realllly coooool blog !
First time here...
Such times and relationships are hard when we try to explain them... I just allow myself to experience them and feel elated :)
Nice poetry... and a kewl blog...
have a nice day... take care... cheers...
cupid round the corner again :)
sahi hai ekdum! actually there is no answer as to what we call that intervening phase of relationship.
good work nidhi!
so is this related with gaurav bhai's mom's suspicious eyes ? wala incident :O
yeah true all frnds are not ur lovers but its true the other way round :D
acchi poem hai short and sounds nice ...even though rhyming is not proper :D i loved it :D
and wat a pic :O
boss if this isn't fiction then u better b careful..this kinda stuff always ends in pain n tears :'(
great poem and crazy pic!! way to go! I could almost feel a rock song in it...
Scribblers Inc.
i simply mean its wonderful..! It needs a brain to write stuff like this...!
Thaaat surprises me!
say dhuu!
first of all i loved the blog header,it's lovely!
your post gave me goosebumps,i went through the same last year.
seeking for love
i lost my friend.
anyways
i liked your blog
rolling you
tc n have a nice day
Oye Niddzzi... Niddzzi Oye..
Yeh poem tuney likhi hain...
Aisa lag raha hain.. kisi romantic novel writer ki aatams ghuss gayi thi tere andar...hehehe ;)
Mast hain... aur itna mat soch...chota sa bheja hain..load mat ley..
Aur... EXERCISE ki...??grrrrrrrrr
guess so many of us can relate to this poem.. at times such undefinable relationships makes you too confused, dont they?
The pic made Speechless....
Your poem made me Breathless..
Nothing more to Say....
You keep Rocking Soniye!!!
oye tu to badi acchi kavita kar lag padi he :)
baat kya hai ?
chill pao!! beer de saath!!
let the confused mind not search for a name. emotions are so crude at times, it cudn be explained to our self, forget others.
nice poem. u take care swts.
i agree wid sawan...our mind jus understands a couple of relationships n d ones which dont fall into those specific categories confuse us...infact they scare us...atlst me...
m too naive to yet find an ans to this so if u do plz lemme kno too...
btw beautiful poem...loved d way u described d state of mind...jus how it is at these times...
we kno thr is nothin wrong...yet it seems :( :(
kya baat hai....
madam ko pyar ho gya buss pata nhi hai... :P
nice poem ...and bahut hi passionate hai...
I can smell something beautiful :P
Oh..i need to accustom myself to so may changes on Blogger, harr cheez mei change hua hai..phew!..
So Niddzieee..this poem is real nice, and as Abhinav said its tough to believe that your wrote this poem, but I just have one thing to say, I knw everyone goes through it at one point of time, but the answer is just to keep the faith, and don't expect too mch of a situation..
And hows your phsysiotherapy haa?
you wrote this? awesome girl.. nids has come a looooong way... words have precision touche...
glad to know this
hop downsome time
www.chronicwriter.com
hey awesome poem :D.really liked it , I guess its called infatuation or a crush :) , will pass with time :) . . .and loved ur template , did I already mention that?
That was such a thought provoking and emotive read. Could relate to it... Surreal.
It is so damn alluring when you walk that fine line between something that is more than just beautiful friendship and love. The ecstasy, the agony... The tantalizing feel...
I learnt to believe one thing, though...
Well... It's that relationships arise for one of 3 things - a reason, a season or a lifetime.
Give it a thought...
Peace. Have a nice day.
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Greetings,
First time 'ere. Sailed in from the ChronicWriter's web page.
I see you maintain a pleasant space here... See you around.
Peace. Be well.
@mads- u sounding like hyper excited bunny and u really are
@Emaan - thanks keep dropping in ;)
@Arv- right. its hard to explain. some relations are grey and grey roads of future.. glad u liked the blog. keep dropping in
@Pisku- i hope nt
@Chitwan- aree i dnt wanna have any more relationships are.I have RD. i love him
@peter- u gt it so right. Gaurav's mom's suspicious eyes. Ma se kuch nahi Chupta.
I dnt write rhyming poems :P
@peter- O yes. for the pic. deviantart ki jai ho.
@Trinaa- looks like someone had gone thru this phase and is exp. :)
@Scribblers- the writer of this blog herself loves Rock. so The theme, header, pics, music is all about it
@Abhinav- dhuuuuuuuuuuuu abhinav
@007- thts wht .. seeking for more u loose wht u have. so better be careful ;)
never ending human desire ;)
@harshita- yes exercise kar rahi hu. multi tasking
@Lena- yah n m confused too
@M.J. - :O wht a master piece
@Sam- beer ki saath hai to kya darna gaun walo se ;)
@sawan- thnks sawan wht u say makes sense
@Mayz- jus how it is at these times...
we kno thr is nothin wrong...yet it seems :( :(
@day dreamer- abe its just frenshi. mainu kisi aur se pyar nahi karni :P
tera naak kharab hogaya hai :P
@Crystal- problem is m nt expecting.. but m gaining more than wht m expecting.. It tickles as i mentioned it.
physio is okey type
@Chronicwriter- u commenting like a stranger.
goooooooooooooooo katti
@kartz- so right.. its alluring. but its difficult and important too to keep us within the line.. once crossed its difficult to get back.
ya i too believe in relationships arise for one of 3 things - a reason, a season or a lifetime.
@fantasies of a lifetime- oo infatuation hai toh koi gal nahi re.. hope its nt serious as it passes
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