Kash kabhi kehte inte din hoagaye tumse baat nahi kiya,
Inna saare din tumko yaad kiya,
kitne din tumko dekha nahi,
kitne din wo hatho main haat nahi tha.
Kitne din huwe tere chehre ki khilti muskan dekhe huwe,
kitne din tu kareeb nahi thi,
kash kehte tujhe bahut bahut yaad aur pyar kiya.
Kash wo din aaye jab tu kahe tu bas meri
BAS MERI..
Inna saare din tumko yaad kiya,
kitne din tumko dekha nahi,
kitne din wo hatho main haat nahi tha.
Kitne din huwe tere chehre ki khilti muskan dekhe huwe,
kitne din tu kareeb nahi thi,
kash kehte tujhe bahut bahut yaad aur pyar kiya.
Kash wo din aaye jab tu kahe tu bas meri
BAS MERI..
23 comments:
SEXY!! mmmmmmmm...vivid description of feelings! lovely!
Kash wo din aaye jab tu kahe tu bas meri
BAS MERI..
really good peice....
bas meri
BAS MERI.. ho priyatama...
dont mind ha for this alteration this for me only....hope u wont mind..
Waaah waaaah waaaah!!! :)
Kitne din ho gaye tum mujshe phone mein bathein karke?? :( hows ma hindi now?? :p
Take care dearie.. :)
Nikhil
kya baath hei yaar... maza aagaya padke.. tension mat le.. ho jayega :)
wow yaar.. very good ... what a peice of poem... very deep and full of emotions .... am almost in tears... u'll get what u want soon...
yo Trinaa
awww.. inni yaad aarahi hai? ki hindi post!
@Palaav- bas meri kyu ki main tere liye desperate hu :P
multi menon
phone wone bhul ja. m too busy these days . hardly able to update my slef in blog only :p
sawan
kisko tension yaar?? tension le ke buddha nahi hona hai.. thts a fiction part
big omi
kinta aur jhut bolega??? almost in tears it seems
Abhinav my first Hindi post (blushes :">)
ahem ahem,...bacchi is missing sumone badly.. ;-)..
kewl!
koi kisi ko miss kaise kare ayr fir poem kaise likhe yeh nidhi se aake pooche :)
wow!!!!!!! loved it!!!
Wowww....Superb....loved it :)
bas meri...
the trail is good Nidhi or Nidzzi.. sounds nice the new name:)
oye thand rak.....u neva know ke ab sunne ko mil jaye???
Well .. True .. we all hope and live on ..
it made me remember something I once wrote:
Another dusk, another night falls;
Am I getting closer to you my destiny?
Patience they say is a virtue,
That’s why I am living on …. Out of Hope
That the Sunset tomorrow won’t be lonesome again
Hmm...bachchi... baat kya hain..badaa romance tapak rahaa hain ;)
BTW, give me some credit... I gave u the same NIDDZZI... didnt I?? lol
kya baat hai koi tou kisi kou behot miss kar reha hai.:)
BTW Nidzzi suits u.:)
keep smiling
love
Sneha
so romantic..........and touchy
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