Thursday, December 18, 2008

Closeness




With the kisses of your lips I close my eyes,
I can hear you and your breath,
your smell still lingers in my bedroom,
how I wish we could be together,
you talk to me more clear than how I'm to my myself,
the rushing thoughts stops by and listens to you,
the words from your lips are lines of my fav. song
always singing so soft and tender
and all I dream is us together.


30 comments:

Anonymous said...

too good :)

And just goody goody romantic :)

Anonymous said...

ohhhhhhhh..someones in an uber romantic mood :D

Me said...

Hmm... Love is in the air :)

as always perfect dil-se thoughts...

Nikhil Menon said...

oh wow!!how romantic..!! :)

I can understand the depth of wats goin inside u..Its jus a matter of tym b4 the good times r gonna be bac.. :)

Think Tank said...

oooooh ..every kind of fever seems to catch blogosphere at one time ..love seems to be the reigning fever now

Mads said...

Awww che..simply romantic che :( :(

AB said...

Haww! Rate this post with 'A'

vemuri said...

hmmm good good...completly romantic.....

john said...

nice lines...

Aevi said...

your smell still lingers in my bedroom

yukk.... whoever said tht has a dogs nose :P

Anil Sawan said...

that was a beautiful picture and a complimenting poem! love is sure in its peaks in blogsville :P

SAURABH AGGARWAL said...

how romantic that is.. i loved it..

Lucifer said...

ahhhhh jus beautiful!!!
sums up d whole season for me

Priya Joyce said...

ahhh! beautiful dear so very beautiful

:)

Zubin said...

wow..have you written it..??

beautiful... :)

Rià said...

Aww tht was so romantic!! :)

Rià said...

and hey where r u??not coming to my blog too. :( :(

Fantasies of a Lifetime said...

oooooooooh . .nice post :)

humbl devil said...

beautiful lines gal...

btw, come collect your reward from my abode...
:)

Amrita~Ams said...

truely effulgent! :)

peter said...

abe i8 must say ...ur best poem so far ..so romantic Niggles :O

badhiya hai !!

RD reading :O :-?

Toonfactory said...

Hey there....real cute words...Romance is in the air...is it because of the weather or....

Merry Christmas...

Have a rocking time gal

Mana said...

Very touching..

Missing someone badly, huh?

Sneha Shrivastava said...

Penned Simply but in a most effective mannered.:)

Merry Christmas N Happy new Year

vemuri said...

u ahve been tagged..... all the best

check out my last post...

Meghaa said...

Fantabulous.... :)

Anonymous said...

a simple srong dosage of being alone.. come to my page from jan 1st onwards.. lots to offer

Nidz said...

thanks one n all for commenting on those 9 lines ...
m missing RD already...

Haritha P Singh said...

hey..ur flyin wid love air..gr8
njoy,,
do viit n comment on ma blog..as iam commentoholic..hehheh
haritha
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com

Tiger said...

You know Nidz, you should write more. You have amazing talent. Find some time :)